Undoubtedly

So, here at school there's a bi-weekly writing workshop, on Tuesdays and Wednesday, that I have started to consistantly attend, and share my work. It is really fun to see everyone else's writing style and story ideas. They also give little lessons and writing prompts which helps aspiring writers be better, not just through the critiques that come. I love it. Currently, I am sharing Dreamrunners, and they love it, which makes me so happy! Perhaps one day I will share MtH, but I am still hesitant because it is still in the works. But it would be good to get a critique on it thus far.  Anyway, we're about 1/4-th of the way into the story, and each night after the workshop I make edits based on their comments. Most of the comments so far have been "Work on Showing, not Telling" which is a big problem for me, but I feel I am getting better. Plus, I get writing time for my Creative Writing Class.
Anyway, the main reason I wanted to post today was, I just observed a rather interesting phenomenon. I started writing Dreamrunners a few months over a year ago, and it has been finished for a little less than a year. During the workshop session today, we read the part when Camaron meets 901 for the first time. "[Camaron] smirk[s] as the silence continues, a sly confident smile. I hold all the answers to the questions undoubtedly running through his head." As this was being read by a fellow workshop-goer, my mind wandered to Winnie the Pooh singing the word undoubtedly in his Blustery Day song. I have not thought about Winnie the Pooh for the longest time, especially that song, but I think I did not put the word "undoubtedly" in error. I think my subconcious remembered Pooh singing "So it's rather safe to say/That it seems that it may turn out to be/It feels that it will undoubtedly/It looks like a rather blustery day, today" and added ubdoubtedly so that I could make the concious connection later.
It wasn't until I got home and began editing the section we read in the workshop that I made the connection and started singing "Blustery Day." It brought back sweet memories of childhood. I now have a strong desire to watch Winnie the Pooh, but as a college student, I will refrain.

Another writing exercise I think would be interesting to try is create a dialogue between two characters from different stories. This would help you guarantee that each character has his or her own voice, and that you're not just relying on dialogue tags between characters. That is my goal for one day. It would also just be interesting to see how two different characters from entierly different worlds meet...

Everything Else

My Goals:

I need to learn how to talk to people and not be shy, and to stop worrying what other people think of me/what I have to say. Once I step out of my comfort zone, I will be able to accomplish more, like asking people for information concerning an ancestor.

Index at least one record a week. Attend the temple twice a month while in Rexburg. Long Term goal/records retention project: Type up the family history records compiled by Emma Jacobson concerning my ancestors.

 Challenges: Forgetting. Not being focused. Being “lazy.”

My Dreams turning into Goals

---Goal 1--- Be Published

Daily: 

• Free-Write five minutes a day

• Edit two paragraphs in MTH a day.

• OR: Write two paragraphs on MTH a day.

Weekly:

• Review edits and make changes as necessary

• Brainstorm where I want my story to go.

Deadline: End of Sophomore year in college.

---Goal 2--- Type up Emma Jacobson’s family history records.

Daily: Type/edit one to two pages a day.

Weekly: Review information and conduct my own research about information presented.

Deadlines: When finished.

I don't have many pictures of my family.

The Formal Introduction

(that kinda sounds like a cool book title, doesn't it? or at least a chapter heading. If your confused, I guess that's the purpose of all this.)

Let me 'splain. No, there is too much. Let me sum up. There is a lot, but I won't sum up. My name is Matea Williams. I won't go into too much detail about myself. If you want to know you'll just have to figure it out, or just find some way to contact me (legally of course). This blog was set up as a requirement for an Introduction to Family History class, but previously as I have been searching the web, I discovered blogs to be a type of online journal. I titled the blog "writing the right" because I wanted the blog to express me, for how ever short a time. But later, as I started thinking of the things I could post on my blog, I decided that I would use the blog for other purposes besides the class. Hence all the introduction appurtenances. (Being an accessory or other item associated with a particular activity or style of living). I like words. Uncommon words (like appurtenances), written words (I would love to learn the art of calligraphy, and I love reading, and I want to be published some day soon), words in other languages (I'm currently learning french, tried my hand at Latin, loved it, want to continue, and speak Pig-Latin fluently and joyously), and the idea of the power behind words. Hence this blog's title. I want to write the correct words. I also want to have the right to write. I also know the right (being a member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints) and I am not afraid to write it. (See, words are fun!) Hence my testimony in blog post one.
When I write, I write what I think is right. I don't really expect many people to be reading this, but if you do, and anything sounds odd to you, just know it is how I think, what I want to write and that's that. So hopefully no harm is done. If you like it, and happen to be a publisher, please email me and ask to hear/read more. I have a bunch of started stories that are dying to be read by someone other than their author.
Part of my interesting way of thinking comes in part from the books I've read. The Book of Mormon being, actually quite prevalent. The language is older, and I enjoy reading it. I currently just finished C.S. Lewis' The Horse and His Boy, a wonderfully well-told story written in an older fashion of writing by a perfectly amazing writer. I will probably be posting frequently about stories I finished, or are currently still finishing, or new story ideas, although I do ask that they not be copied, as I came up with them. I imagined them. I will refrain of doing so now. I have noodles on the stove. Don't ask me for my favorite book or author. I enjoy too many favorites to list. It's mostly fantasy, sci-fi stuff with little romance. I'm not big into romance in books.
I like handwriting and cool fonts (hence the sporadic ones on the blog). I also like the color purple, and green and orange and yellow are starting to grow greatly on me. I even like purple with pink on occasion. I have a tad too much blue, although it can be a very beautiful color at times.
I enjoy the outdoors, and hiking, and animals, and playing games, and snowy weather. Rain makes me want to curl up inside and read a great book. I like being active, but for much of the time I get lazy. Much of the food I like begins with the letter "P" (don't ask me why, I don't know), but I like a great many other foods as well. I love to listen to music. Musicals, movie soundtracks, and a couple of pop artists. Namely Owl City and Lenka. Not too much into '80's music, to the displeasure of my mom. I like singing, attempt to play the piano, and can play the oboe, although I haven't practiced it for quite a number of years. I am inclined to a quiet nature, although, I think very many thoughts. (Or perhaps because of that. Anyway, hence the long post). I don't have the most friends ever, but I throughly enjoy the ones that I have. I am not a very sappy person, so I probably won't be expressing my personal feelings very often, even on here. Well, enough of all that. I have to go figure out how to strain noodles with no strainer.

CI.5: Beginning my Book of Remembrance

My Testimony:

I am a member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints. I know it, I live it, I love it. I know that God speaks through prophets, and that He has not stop speaking. Thomas S. Monson is the current prophet. I know that Joseph Smith was a prophet and that he translated the Book of Mormon, which is the word of God. The Book of Mormon was written for our day.
I know that the importance of families is an essential teaching in the Gospel, and that families can be together for ever. Sacred ordinances for deceased family members can be completed in the temple. Temples are the house of God here on earth. I know that my life has a purpose, and that my Heavenly Father knows who I am and loves me.
I know that repentance/the atonement is for everyone, and that Heavenly Father will forget my sins when I truly repent. I know that His Son, Jesus Christ, died for my sins.
I will never check my religion at the door, I will remain steadfast and immovable in my testimony.
[In the name of Jesus Christ, Amen]

Life Goals:

I will be published.
I will be married in the temple.
I will have children (lots if if can help it!)
I will always be a member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints.
I will stay positive.